My Entry- Machinima Competition 2010

Blaknite12 · **Posted:** February 11th, 2010, 11:07 pm

If this is in the wrong place, please feel free to move it moderators

Here is a link to my video, I spent a BUNCH of time on it, I hope it has at least a little entertainment value

*URL removed, see below!

Thanks for watching!

-Blaknite12

EDIT:

Shoot well the first video I uploaded didn't have the required text in it, so I've had to re-upload. I'm really annoyed because I know for a fact I put it in there, I have no idea why it disappeared though.

There goes all my coments, ratings, and views

Here is the new link:

Adbot · **Posted:** February 11th, 2010, 11:07 pm

Bonsai99 · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 7:54 am

Very nice! But some parts were a little too fast.

Italy4life · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 9:45 am

i think it was decent, but imo it was dumb for the videos to be 30 seconds each.

Blaknite12 · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 11:11 am

Haha yeah time was definitely against me in this vid, I tried my best to get everything I wanted in there while trying not to ruin the flow and cohesion of the video.

Anyway here is a second ad I made focusing more on epicness then comedy. I also used the orb with every shot in this one.

Pennstate315 · Runite Member 5-25-10

I liked it. The 30 second time restrain is stupid

Tim · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 2:19 pm

Pennstate315 wrote:

I liked it. The 30 second time restrain is stupid

It's an ad, I rarely see an ad that is over 1:00 long. It's alright. I saw some spelling mistakes and the editing in some parts are sort of bad (the farming patch). But it was a machinima, maybe the end should be removed because you can't even read it because it comes and goes so fast.

Adbot · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 2:19 pm

jsbrules2 · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 7:07 pm

They're both great, i don't really have any critisisms

Alex_SE · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 10:07 pm

Personally I like the second one :wink:

. Good job!
Practice makes perfection.

By the way:

blaknite12 wrote:

I havn't uploaded either one yet... Which one should I use?

I'd definitely send the second video. The first one is too common, specially after ecxl's "Jagex bronze daggers" video.

I Godswhip I · **Posted:** February 13th, 2010, 11:32 pm

I think the second one was better the first one was a little fast

Duke Juker · RSBandB Donor since 07/01/2010

Not bad. They are very funny. Short, quick, and hard to understand sometimes, but still very funny. Nice job. d=(^_-)z

Blaknite12 · **Posted:** February 25th, 2010, 2:44 pm

Well, fail on my part. Oh well. Made this vid for fun:

Alex_SE · **Posted:** February 26th, 2010, 6:12 am

Blaknite12 wrote:

Well, fail on my part. Oh well. Made this vid for fun:

Its ok, but the voice acting could be much better.
Keep making more :wink:

Tim · **Posted:** February 26th, 2010, 1:00 pm

Blaknite12 wrote:

Well, fail on my part. Oh well. Made this vid for fun:

It sounds similar to another video I've seen before. I agree with alex, you need to speak up. But this was was alright, maybe a little to much zooming in and out, and spamming your chat with "Members only area" should be changed to just one line of it.

SuPa · **Posted:** February 28th, 2010, 6:40 pm

Personally I found your parody of freecredit report better than the one that is currently winning.

Blaknite12 · **Posted:** March 1st, 2010, 5:39 pm

Haha yeah didn't put too much effort into it. My voice sucks and it was even worse because I was sick when I was singing that lol.

The video was made because I was kind of dissapointed with the choices jagex made for the finalists.

I don't believe ANY video that can be duplicated (or even made better) in AN HOUR should even be CONSIDERED for the top 10. My lyrics are better IMO, dunno about the filming and singing. I mean the line "I never knew lesser demons were so strong" is completely random...

Anyway I'm pretty sure freecreditreport.com commercials are shown only in the US, so the judging panel probably thought it was an original tune made by the guy who created the video. I also think most of the voters have never seen the commercial either. I mean it's SO EASY to make a video like that. I'm not saying mine should have been in the top 10, but there were PLENTY more better then the top 10 they chose.

/rant